Our Music Video Feedback

 We were given feedback from our idea by our peers that we need to evaluate as well as learn from. Firstly we need to work on a specific audience as we haven't fully specified who they are and what we expect from them. This will mean we can enter markets to gain maximum exposure towards the band but as well as the genre we will present. We should also find concepts to make our band stand out, so maybe incorporating it by editing our video very precisely as well as making it seem realistic. Audience wise, we need to engage with an audience so that they can relate to our intricate parts of the video like our costumes or locations. We also need to make sure our narrative flows and follows a sequence of events so that is understandable for those who may not get what we are trying to say.

Overall this feedback gives us the implication that a lot of work is needed to be able to pull of this music video and that we need to make it perfect in order to champion the narrative. We have also decided to combat the feedback by focusing more on our performance element to show the organic side of our artist to maximize our bands exposure as an Indie Rock Band. Our narrative also needs to tell the story of the bands star image from a working class background towards stardom.